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too confusing and wordy, ending with "offline" is anti-climactic.

it is interesting, but it doesn't point to the overall goal of providing quality education to people in developing countries who do not have access to the internet.

similar to the first title, but this is less compelling.

don't like this one ~ it suggests a dropping or disabling (if there's such a word) of online learning, rather than enabling a desirable situation.

looks like anarchy haha, it might be misleading in a negative way to some people.

revolution sounds good, but it seems like the goal is to take education offline, rather than changing the process; why should i care about offline education?

i think using the term world revolution seems appropriate because it is a new phase that everyone is investing themselves in.

there seems to be a disconnect between revolution and offline. it's like when you read it, the flow increases and then once it reaches offline, it drops.

this sounds neat. i wonder if others might think that we are making online materials inaccessible ("taking... offline").

let's not scare them off with thoughts of a revolution. for many, e-learning itself is scary. there are many computer-phobic people out there still thinking skynet is right around the corner, and they won't want to help bring it! lol

sentence too complicated for a quick look.

sounds very hyperactive but seems like it's getting things done.