ناوی پەیجی ڕووداوەکانی Kickstarter

2. ئایا ناوی پەیجەکە تۆ پەیوەندیدانی بەرز دەکات (بە شێوەیەکی تماشاکردنی ڤیدیۆ یان گەڕاندنەوە بۆ زانیاری زیاتر)؟

  1. awkward title, doesn't flow naturally.
  2. the concept of the e-learning divide is only known by people in the industry and those already involved in the issue; the previous title explained the problem succinctly and without requiring prior information. the video will be a huge asset as many will not take the time to scroll down and read further.
  3. at a quick first glance, it is unclear what the e-learning divide refers to.
  4. the title is too generic; the specific mission remains unclear.
  5. if i didn't know anything about fle, this seems rather vague and would not draw me in. i don't have a clear picture of what this is about.
  6. diction creativity but unclear and not straightforward enough.
  7. it seems unclear what you are donating to.
  8. sounds good; this is more ambiguous but might actually attract viewers to take further actions.
  9. do not favor e-learning
  10. makes me want to know how you're bridging the online learning divide so i would scroll down. maybe not use online learning?