Kickstarter Title Page Voting

Do you have any general thoughts or suggestions?

  1. 999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999
  2. ddd
  3. taking online education to the offline world is, in my opinion, the best approach. it's the simplest yet most effective way to convey what you want to communicate.
  4. none at this time
  5. am i done yet?
  6. you're welcome!
  7. if we could somehow mix 1 and 3, i think that would be my favorite.
  8. number 4 seems clear enough, but the phrase sounds a bit too "dense" compared to number 1.
  9. bridging the learning divide rather than e-learning
  10. a couple of typos in your questionnaire: "do you 'have' any general thoughts or suggestions", and "please 'comment'..." (should read "have" and "comment" respectively.) the first title is definitely the one that suggests that fle is offering/giving something desirable, states what that is, and clearly describes the target audience, all in clear and simple terms.