i feel that "free, open-source education for all" perfectly encapsulates what we are doing. it is easily understandable and agreeable to all sectors (public, private, and philanthropic) while eliminating unnecessary confusion for potential partners and funders.
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awesome! i want to see the video.
the title i preferred isn't complicated, and it gets straight to the point. it's all-inclusive and sparks interest: how are we going to provide free, open-sourced education for everyone? every other title feels like a guessing game. i want to know what this is about from the beginning.
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many of these titles are effective in making people see kolibri as something for everyone, which is positive.
nice work!!
this is my input....
generally: i think that the headlines should say "this is something that needs to be done" rather than "this is something that's already being done". i know it's already being done, but for people on kickstarter to feel ownership, they should know that this will happen because they support... they shouldn't get a feeling that it'll happen anyways by other means.
so "take online education..." instead of "taking online"
my favorite remix would be: "bridge the e-learning divide: share the online learning revolution offline"
immediately after, we could explain how: "a massive online e-learning revolution is happening. but people without internet access become disadvantaged. let's bring them education and knowledge on offline media"
/ben